Sabtu, 20 Oktober 2012

BEACH

SUNDAK vs KUTA




Sundak beach and Kuta beach are a beach that have more differences than simmilarities. Sundak is in Yogyakarta, whereas Kuta is in Bali. The good part of Sundakis its very clen beach, but Kuta is now a dirty beach. Sundak has a white sands and its very nice to playing with the sands, but in Kuta the sands is dark-sands. Sundak is a quiet place, it can be used to relaxing our self, but Kuta is a crowded place, many people from other country come to Kuta for playing and enjoy nthe beach which is famous in Bali. On the other way, Kuta has a good part too. Kuta has a medium wave and we can play with the wave satisfyingly, whereas in Sundak we just can paly in edge of the beach because the wave is very strong and we must be careful of it. Kuta is in a central cityin Bali, so its can visit easily, but in Sundak we must very patient because it is in a remote area in Wonosari. It takes 2 hours from central Yogyakarta, its very long time to get tha pleasure. The sands in Kuta is clear from coral, so we absolutely enjoyable to walk, whereas in Sundak is many pieces of coral in the sands, so we absolutely must walking carefully. Although Sundak and Kuta have many differences, they also are have a few simmilarities. Both of Sundak and Kuta are a beautiful beach, they also have many visitors in the weekend. Both of them have the beautiful landscape and clear air. In short, while Sundak and Kuta have some good bad part of each other, they are a place that is a must to visit. When you visit Sundak and Kuta, you can believe how beautiful Indonesia is. I’m very proud to be an Indonesian.

writing 2

TARA


 
I have a niece called Tara. She lives in Solo. She is 3 years old child. She is a beautiful child with a fat body, dark-brown skin, her height is about 75 cm. She has an oval face with flat-nosed, big eyes, nice eyelashes, straight hair and a big lips. She has a good and bad traits, although she is still 3 years old now. The good traits of her are she is a cute child, she is very talkactive cxhild and never seems afraid with other people whom she never knows before and one more thing she is a delligent person. She always wants to know anything that she seeing. As the normal person, of course she has bad trait too. She is a careless child. Sometimes after she draws something she never put the pencil back on the case, so the day after, she is try to find her pencil panicly. She is a lazy child too. Almost everyday, she wakes up at 8 a.m. , whereas she is school at 9 a.m. If anyone try to wkes her up, she always angry and cry like almost children in yhe world. Actually, she is one of person that I miss everytime.



Writing 2

GREAT CONCERT

                   I saw Abdul and the Coffee Theory’s concert at Gor Tri Lomba Juang with my friend last Saturday (13/10). It was both of good and bad things. One of bad thing was I felt very tired that day, because I had a lot of activities before. I never imagined Icould went to TLJ with my condition on that moment. Another bad thing was when I saw my watch and it showed 12.30 a.m. and it not yet finished, I was afraid about rode motorcycle to my boarding house with perfectly dark and any robber. One more thing, the concert was start in time not on time. I waited Abdul from 7 p.m. and they just performed 5 songs and started it at 12 a.m. I feel annoyed on that moment, but it was any good things too. I met another Lovers Theory the fanbase of Abdul and the Coffee Theory in there and talk each other. On the other hand, I had a new friends in that day. When I feel bored with opening section I opened my twitter and tweet something that mentined to Abdul.for a minute, Isaw my twitter again and Abdul was reply my tweet. I was so happy because of it. It was the best thing I ever had. When Abdul performed, I just felt it was unbelieveable. I could saw Abdul, Wandi, Alex and Andre performed amazingly. They showed 5 songs like Happy Ending, Loveable, Beauty is You, Amazing You, and the last is Aku Suka Caramu. All the songs are showed with different arrangement. It made the jazz music from them more beautiful and colorful. My eyes was never missed from Abdul. He was the best jazz singer ever, I think. In the middle of their performed Echa Soemantri as the main drummer came suprisely and played for only one song but it was very amazing! He was a cool drummer and handsome person. Because I was in infront of the stage, I can saw all of Abdul and the Coffee Theory members very closer and very clear. I sang and enjoyed their performed and felt perfectly happy on that day. It was my beautiful one hour on my life. I would never forgot it. 


 

Kamis, 04 Oktober 2012

springtime analysis



BY ; ANNISA F.S.
2211411019

SPRINGTIME
Maria Irene Fornes

>> Summary
            In small city at 1958, there is courty yard of medical school represented by a square light on the down-right area of the stage, the lights go up on the courty and of a medical enter. There are Greta and Rainbow, a lesbian couple that love each other. One day in Rainbow’s bedroom, Greta protested to Rainbow. She said that Rainbow looks too fat right now, she never wear clothes that fit. Rainbow loses temper and Greta doesn’t like it. Someday, Greta is ill and Rainbow tries to find some money to take care of her, when Greta said how is Rainbow can find money, she can’t said anything. She just said that it would make Greta doesn’t love her anymore if she told to Greta, but finally, Rainbow said that she steal the watch from out of the storethen she promise she will sell it to Greta’s treatment. She promise she will find a buyer. After that stealled, Rainbow was caught by a man whose watch she took. He grabbed her and made her to go with the man to his place. Rainbow was forced by him, he pushed her in and he said he’d put her in a jail. Rainbow is finally agree to do something to the man. Greta wonders if Rainbow if Rainbow loves Ray, because she still work to him after Greta feel good. Rainbow said that Ray is just a friend. When Greta still ill, she said to Rainbow if she die, is Rainbow still loved her? Rainbow just reply whether she live or die only her she loved. Finally, Greta is know that Rainbow work to Ray to lying naked with the man, but its just for Greta’s treatment. Ray come to Greta and seems like something from Greta. When Rainbow comes back, she looks at them and feel jealous. She is doubtful that Greta loving Ray right now.  
            Rainbow doesn’t feel loved Greta anymore because she jealous with Ray, and finally  she leaves Greta because she never respect and always missunderstand for her doing to Greta’s treatment. At last, Greta found the last love letter from Rainbow and it contains that Rainbow always love Gretha forever even after she dead.

>> Problems
1.      Rainbow  :

·         She want to do anything to Greta’s healthy but Greta doesn’t want Rainbow to doing it.
It shows on conversation :
“Rainbow : You are  ill and we must take care of you.
Greta  :   No, I dont want you to steal for me. You’ll be arrested. You’ll go to jail. You mustn’t.
Rainbow : I must my darling “

·         She must lie to Greta that she work to Ray with lying naked with that man. When, Greta finally know about it she feels very upset.
“ Greta : Why do you do that? You’re lying naked with that man! What is he doing to you! Why do you take you’re clothes off! Why do you take such picture!
Rainbow : I’m sorry! I’m sorry!
Greta : Why do you do that!
Rainbow : I have to.
Greta : Why!
Rainbow : Because you must have treatment (Greta cries). I don’t mind (Greta sobs). It’s for you.
·         She feels Greta betray her, but Gretha was never talk. She finally doesn’t love Greta anymore.
“ Rainbow : For me love is adoring and to be loved is to be adored. So, I never felt I loved before till I met you, but I don’t feellove anymore right now.”

2.      Greta

·         She want to recovered but she can’t allow Rainbow to steal for her.
“Rainbow : It’s a good watch.
Greta : Get rid of it.
Rainbow : I’ll sell it
Greta : To whom?
Rainbow : I’ll find a buyer
Greta : I’m afraid.
Rainbow : Don’t be.
Greta : Just get rid of it.
Rainbow : We need money. For you. To make you well.”

·         She discovers what Rainbow does for Ray. She got envelope which include some picture and looks through them with alarm.
  Greta :       Why do you do that! You’re lying naked with that man! Who is that man! What is he doing to you! Why do you do that! Why do you takes your clothes off! Why do you take such pictures!! “

3.      Ray

·         He want to gives some advice to Rainbow, but its never accepted by her.
“ Rainbow : It’s you who places too much importance on whether I like men or I like women. For me it’s not important. Does it make any difference to anyone? If it doesn’t make any difference to anyone, why should anyone care??
Ray : If it doesn’t doesn’t make any difference, whydont you choose to love a man?
Rainbow : If I don’t like men, why should I try to love someone I don’t love when I already love someone I love?”


>> RESOLUTON
           
Eventually, Rainbow left Greta “ Greta reaches out and takes Rainbow’s hand. Rainbow allows her to hold her hand, but doesn’t respond. She leans over and puts her head next to Greta. Rainbow walks to the door slowly and exits while the song plays to the end.”
·         I think is the best resolution, Rainbow was do anything for Greta’s treatment, she stealed, she worked, she is very hard to get some money to Greta, but she never respect and always missunderstand about what Rainbow doing. So, Rainbow is better to leaves Greta and back to the “normal” life, although she is loves Greta who is never respect her and also she is betray her with Ray.

>> THEME AND TONE
1.      Theme :
 A sacrifice of woman to her girlfriend’s health. It is never ending love, whereas they are have a “wrong” trait.
It’s written in love letter from Rainbow and it contains “I love you more than anything in the world, and its to you that I owe my happiness. I always felt that I didn’t want to love with all my heart or not at all, and that I wanted to loved the same way or not at all. With you, I had this, and if anything happens to me, I wanted you to remember this that you are my angel and I always love you. Even after death. Forever yours , Rainbow.”

2.      Tone

·         Sad : When Greta was ill and Rainbow have some money to her treatment
“Rainbow : You are  ill and we must take care of you.
Greta  :   No, I dont want you to steal for me. You’ll be arrested. You’ll go to jail. You mustn’t. “
·         Happy : When Rainbow steal watch and have some money to Greta’s treatment.
 “Rainbow : It’s a good watch.
Greta : Get rid of it.
Rainbow : I’ll sell it
Greta : To whom?
Rainbow : I’ll find a buyer”

·         Angry : When Greta found envelope that include of Rainbow and Ray’s damn picture.
   Greta :      Why do you do that! You’re lying naked with that man! Who is that man! What is he doing to you! Why do you do that! Why do you takes your clothes off! Why do you take such pictures!! “
·         Jealousy : When Greta do something with Ray and Rainbow is coming“ Rainbow enters. She is obviusly alarmed. She looks at Greta, then Ray, then at Greta again. Greta turns here head away and sobs. Rainbow and Ray look at each other.”






Selasa, 02 Oktober 2012

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WONDERFUL BALI

My unforgetable experience was made in Senior High School. When I was in school , I went to Bali to joined Study Tour. Me and another students went to Bali by bus and it was took 18 hours. I felt very exhausted on that moment. We landed first in Tanah Lot around 4am. We saw sunrise and foreign that enjoyed Tanah Lot in the morning. In that day , I also visited Joger, Kuta beach, rode Komotra, at the end we went to hotel to relaxed. It was morning, I saw on the window it was still dark, whereas it was 5 o’clock. Sometimes, I heard bell rang at 6 o’clock it was Hindu’s time to prayed. That was seconds days i’d stayed in Bali. On that morning, we visited Barong Dance’s place. I was amazed to the dancer and other tourist who enjoyed the show. I went to other place too. I visited Pertempuran Rakyat Bali museum in Renon, Dreamland beach, Garuda Wisnu Kencana,and we stoped in Cahayu to bought a lot of snack and marchandise to my family. Followed the next day, I prepared to returned on my hometown Ambarawa. I visited Bedugul for the last journey,and took photo in temple near the lake that showed in coins 100.000. Although I was very tired, I enjoyed every moment during in Bali. It was my wonderful experience.


Descriptive Text
MY ROOMMATE

My roommate in boarding house named Retno. She is a beautiful girl with thin body, white skin, and her height is about 160cm. She have an oval face with flat-nosed, slanted-eyes, good eyelashes, and thin lips. Everyday, she wearing head-scraft  in campus. She is studying  in Economic Development right now. She is shy person and sealed girl, but she is very nice person. She is religious and never lashes out to other people. Actually, she is my close friend in SMA. I hope we can become best friends till we are going older.




Expository Text
JKT48 vs CHERRYBELLE

JKT48 and Cherrybelle have more differences than similarities. JKT48 is Idol Group, whereas Cherrybelle is Girlband. The significant differences between idol group and girlband are the members and genre of  their music. JKT48 have 26 members (24 Indonesian and 2 from Japan) , whereas Cherrybelle have 9 members. JKT48 have sister group in Japan called AKB48 and the genre music of JKT48 is Japanese music which adapting from their sister group, but Cherrybelle have genre of Indo-Korean music. Members of JKT48 are around 15 untill 18 years old, whereas Cherrybelle’s members are around 18 until 20 years old. JKT48 have the same uniforms of their members in their performs, but Cherrybelle have a little bit different in dress up. JKT48’s members are from different ethnic, but Cherrybelle’s members are almost from Chinese ethnic. Most of JKT48 songs are about school, teen love, and summer, whereas Cherrybelle songs are almost about love. JKT48 are more famous in Tokyo, but Cherrybelle are famous in Indonesia. JKT48 frequently performs in Tokyo Dorme with AKB48 and have privat theatre in Jakarta, but Cherrybelle just performs in Indonesia. JKT48 just can performs in Jakarta and Tokyo, but Cherrybelle can sings and performs in everyplace in Indonesia. JKT48 have many fans named WOTA, they are almost include of men, Cherrybelle have many fans too named Twibi and Twiboy, but they are include almost of women and a little bit men. Although they have many differences, they absolutely are have a few similarities. Both of JKT48 and Cherrybelle members are women, they also dances if they performs. They also have an arttactive performs in every moment. In short, while JKT48 and Cherrybelle have some similarities, their differences can makes Indonesian music industry are more beautiful and colorful.